剑桥雅思写作9分范文 Model Essays for IELTS Writing_[英]丹·伯恩斯（DanBerns）_9787111735342

本书是雅思考官丹·伯恩斯十余年评分经验的精华。作为考官，他非常了解中国考生的应试特点，尤其是考生得分偏低的Task 2写作专项。为了帮助考生解决写作中常见的中式英语问题、教授考生用思辨的方式拓展写作思路，作者在本书中收集了近十年来在雅思A类和G类写作考试Task 2 中出现过的各类题材的议论文写作题，并且为每道题目提供了符合考官评分标准的高质量范文，对考生的写作具有很强的指导意义。

A Letter to Readers

Dear readers,

I want to welcome you to the third book in IELTS EXAMINER SERIES of 9 POINTS. A lot has changed in IELTS since the first book was released seven years ago, and this book will help you deal with some of those changes. The first major point is that over the next few years, the IELTS writing exam is not going to be marked in China anymore, but largely marked in other countries, where it can be done more cheaply.

This will have two effects on the writing exam, one small and one big. The small effect is that your papers will not be sent to Shanghai, Beijing, Guangzhou, or any of the marking centres in China anymore. Your papers will be scanned and sent to examiners in places like India, where your exam will be checked and examined. This leads to the bigger effect. As the papers are no longer going to be marked in China, which means that you students, have to start breaking out of your comfort zones and writing about what is going on around the world, rather than just writing about what is happening in your town, city, or country.

This book doesnt only contain essays, vocabulary and expressions which will help you to push beyond 6.5, but also contains ideas, news, and logic from the real world, which will easily push you beyond 7.5. The most important thing to remember about the IELTS test, is…

IT IS NOT AN ENGLISH TEST ITS A GENERAL KNOWLEDGE TEST

It doesnt matter if you can read and write perfect English, if you know nothing about the question. How many times have you looked at a question about the environment, education, crime, health, food etc. and your mind was completely blank? This book will give you all the language, ideas, and confidence you need to crush Task 2!

So what are you waiting for? Jump into the book! In closing, I wish you all the luck in the world!

Dan Berns

2023.05.01

给读者的一封信

亲爱的读者,

欢迎大家来到雅思考官9分系列的第三本书。自7年前第一本书出版以来，雅思考试发生了很大变化，这本书将帮助你应对其中的一些变化。第一个要点是，在未来几年，雅思写作考试将不再在中国评分，而主要是在其他国家评分，在那里评分费用更低。

这对写作考试有两个影响，一个小影响，一个大影响。小影响是，你的试卷将不再被送到上海、北京、广州或中国的任何一个阅卷中心。你的试卷将被扫描并发送给印度等地的考官，在那里你的考试成绩将被核对和检查。这导致了更大的影响，由于试卷不再在中国评分，这意味着学生们必须开始跳出你们的舒适区，写世界各地正在发生的事情，而不仅仅是写你们的小镇、城市或国家正在发生的事情。

这本书不仅包含文章、词汇和表达(这些可以帮助你取得6.5分以上的成绩)，还包含来自现实世界的想法、新闻和逻辑（这些可以让你轻松地取得7.5分以上的成绩）。关于雅思考试要记住的最重要的事情是
这不是英语测试，而是常识测试。

如果你对这个问题一无所知，那么你的英文读写能力是否完美并不重要。有多少次当你看到关于环境、教育、犯罪、健康、食品等的问题时，你的大脑一片空白?这本书将为你提供完成任务2所需的所有语言、想法和信心!

那么，你还在等什么呢？赶紧投入到这本书的学习中来吧！最后，我祝你好运无边!

丹·伯恩斯

2023.05.01

A Quick Note about Topics

When I was writing this book, I used real Task 2 questions that had been used over the past five years. As you can imagine, the list of questions was huge, and it took me a long time to sort through them. However, after a while I noticed that there were patterns in the questions used. The most important pattern I noticed was that some topics appeared more than others.

The topic that shows up most in Task 2 is educationaround 25% of the exams from the last five years were about this topic. Other topics that showed up a lot were health, crime, living in cities, parenting and charities, which all showed up around 10% of the time. With these figures in mind, you should probably remember there is a higher chance of getting an educationrelated question.

With those topics in mind, all the questions in the book have one or two keywords at the top, to help you stay on track. For example:

Space travel has been possible for some tim

目录CONTENTS
A Letter to Readers
给读者的一封信
A Quick Note about Topics
本书使用说明
序号范文题目页码
001
Nowadays, many charities publicize what they do by giving a name to a particular day, such as Childrens Day for encouraging the good treatment of children or National NonSmoking Day for encouraging people to give up smoking. Why do these charities and organizations do this? How effective can these special days be?

002
Some people believe that imported food has a positive effect on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

003
Nowadays a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think this has a negative effect on children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

004
Nowadays many old people live in retirement communities with other old people. Is this a positive or negative development?

005
In the modern age many people think that it is unnecessary to teach children the skill of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

006
In some countries, small towncentre shops are out of business because people are driving to large outoftown stores. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

007
Young people are often influenced in their behaviour and situations by others of the same age. This is called peer pressure. Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?

008
Space travel has been possible for some time and some people think space tourism could be developed in the future. To what extent do you think its a positive or negative development?

009
Some people suggest that a country should try to produce all the food for its population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

010
In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

011
After some criminals are released from prison, they still continue to commit crimes. Why do you think this is? What can be done to prevent it?

012
Some people believe that a country can benefit a lot from universities education, while others believe that sending a large percentage of young students to universities leads to unemployment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

013
To learn effectively, children need to eat a healthy meal at school. How true is this statement? Whose responsibility is it to provide food for school children?

014
Some people think that the government should pay for public libraries in every town, while some people think it is a waste of money because we can access information from the Internet. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

015
As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. In your opinion, what are the reasons and effects on society?

016
It is increasingly popular to find out the history of your family. What do you think are the reasons and is it a positive or negative development?

017
Memorisation of information by frequent repetition, namely rote learning, plays a role in many education systems. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

018
Ambition is an important character for people who want to be successful in life. Is it a positive or negative characteristic?

019
News reports in the media tend to focus on problems and emergencies. This might be harmful to individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

020
Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the government rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

021
In many countries, 24hour news channels transmit throughout day and night. Some people think this is a positive development, but others do not think so. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

022
In the world, only a few languages are increasing in use, while many others are declining. Do you think this is a

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